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My Outline Essay

1. Topic Sentence :  " How has globalization changed your country "
2. Supporting Sentences 1   : In Indonesia, public transportation become integrated and interconnected systems caused by globalization.
3. Supporting Sentences 2   : Globalization have affected the technology areas.
4. Supporting Sentences 3   : Economic has been changed cause by globalization. 
5. Concluding Sentence : In summary, globalization has change indonesian fields which are public transportation, technology and economic scale. Globalization have some positive impact for many people such as interconnected and automatic in many fields.

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  1. Muhammad Fariq Assyddiqi15 Mei 2019 pukul 03.14

    In overall your outline is already good. You keep it simple but still get the point

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  2. Eduardus Stevanno P15 Mei 2019 pukul 03.21

    its a great topic. Good Job!!

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  3. Miftahul Rahman15 Mei 2019 pukul 03.26

    Hello wildan, your outline essay is Great. I like it
    Good job 👍

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  4. Findew15 Mei 2019 pukul 03.36

    What a great topic! The support sentence is clear, it makes me understand the topic flow. Can't wait for an essay!

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  5. Yunita15 Mei 2019 pukul 03.36

    Wow, it's a good topic. Your sentence is very clear, and easy to understand. Good job!

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  6. Gita fitri15 Mei 2019 pukul 04.26

    Wow wildan !! you explaine your outline detail and clear. good job

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  7. Dea's Daily Update15 Mei 2019 pukul 04.30

    Hi wildan you have a good outline and nice supporting sentence

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  8. Phyrel Asri15 Mei 2019 pukul 04.57

    It’s a good topic and interesting support sentences. You made the outline in clear. Keet it up!!

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  9. Yohana Hutasoit15 Mei 2019 pukul 05.45

    Such a great topic, and your outline is clear. Good job!

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  10. Novia Cita Dewi15 Mei 2019 pukul 05.52

    Wawwwww, What a great topic and a very clear outline you made!!! i can't wait to read your essay !!!

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  11. Fegri dwi andini putri15 Mei 2019 pukul 06.18

    It’s a great outline. I’m waiting for your essay. Good job!!!

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  12. Vani15 Mei 2019 pukul 07.51

    It's a good outline! It can be understood easily. Good job!

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  13. Ejej15 Mei 2019 pukul 07.52

    Interesting topic with a good outline..nicee

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  14. Vera Aprillia Suryanita15 Mei 2019 pukul 08.49

    can't wait for your next essay , good luck

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  15. Aldo Tito Kelana15 Mei 2019 pukul 09.13

    its a great outline nice

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  16. Wildan Aulia17 Mei 2019 pukul 06.20

    My revised outline


    1. Topic Sentence : “ Techonology of Public Transportation change caused by Globalization “
    2. Major Supporting 1 : In Indonesia, technology of eco-friendly car as a result of change caused by globalization
    3. Major Supporting 2 : Globalization changed the technology of train
    4. Major Supporting 3 : Globalization have affected the technology of bus
    5. Concluding Sentence: In summary, globalization has changed three major of public transportation which are changed technology of car, train, and bus.

    BalasHapus

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