My Favorite Activities On The Weekend
In my life, i do many activities that i have done on the weekend and also i have many favorite activities. First, my favorite activities is singing. I am very happy if i am singing, almost every weekend i always singing in front of my friends. Also my family is very like to sing, singing can give some benefits to my self become enjoy, relax and to be able increasing my spirit. The second activities is read many books. I usually always read many books on the weekend, types of books that i read are novel, science books, fiction books, technology books. Although the prices of these books is little bit expensive, i have willing to spend money to buy these books. If i reads some books, i can increase my insight or knowledge on my brain. It's so excited to spent time on the weekend. The third activities is i am playing the online games, the online games is very interesting because i can reach it only in my smartphone or gadget. But if my gadget is crashed, i will go to the games box to plays the online games. There are several online games that i often to plays, which are survival games, arcade, and games strategy. It can motivate me to refresh and stimulate my brain to think fast and precise. Finally, i can do that activities which are singing, read some books, playing games online because it's valuable for me to refresh and making good my brain not only good for my brain but to make my memory is long term.
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Hapusgood essay and the requirement completed.good job man
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HapusCool... would love to hang out with you bro XD
BalasHapusAre you really ? Thank you, have a nice day
HapusGood essay and very completely
BalasHapusThank you very much, have a nice day
HapusAnd also i have many favorite activities such as singing, reading books, and playing games... I like to sing because..... Continue
BalasHapusOkay thank you, have a nice day
Hapuswhat a productive things to do in weekend. you really good in delivering it into sentences. But it will be better if you delete "It's so excited to spend time on the weekend" in 8th lines because it is not related with the previous sentence. i believe that if you delete that, your paragraph will be more clearer to read and to understand.
BalasHapusMaybe i can do like what you did in your weekend hehe
Thank you very much for your suggestion, i will revised it as soon as possible. Have a nice day
HapusThank you sita for your advice, i will fix it okay
Hapusits a good story bro,good job!!
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HapusHallo nicky, thanks for your suggestion. Have a nice day nicky
BalasHapusWow what an amazing story
BalasHapusOkay,thank you
HapusIt's a good paragraph, good job boy!
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Hapuswow such a valuable activities to spend your weekend... well done and keep singing
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HapusWaww, I couldn’t agree more. it was very good essay you made! and fyi, we have some same activies in the weekend❤ my suggestion is i hope you can add more sentence in your story so i can enjoy it more ^^
BalasHapusOkay noted, thank you novia
Hapusinteresting things to do on your weekend you have, i think you did great for the essay i like your essay great job
BalasHapusThank you aldo ^-^
Hapusit is a nice activities, maybe next time we can sing together.
BalasHapusOkay surya, thank you very much
HapusA bit advice to add more conclusion and i love to play gamess too yey!!
BalasHapusOkay noted je, thanks for your advice :)
Hapuswaw it looks like you're a very confident man, great boy hehe.
BalasHapusand overall your essay is clear and neat. good job
Wahh wahh thank you very much gita
HapusWhat a good activities! Your writing is very clear, I get the topic, supporting idea, and conclusion easily.
BalasHapusOkay thank you very much findew, have a nice day
HapusOverall good, but I suggest you to rearrange the minor supporting sentence in good sequences ^^
BalasHapusOkay noted, i will rearrange the minor supporting sentence. Thank you
HapusThose activities are good activities that always done by many people. And ur writing is good, but in 9th lines you write "usually always" i suggest you to only use one word, use only usually or use only always. Good job!
BalasHapusOkay noted yohana,thank you. Have a nice day
HapusI like your activities,same like me, but for reading a book i dont really like, because its make me sleepy😂
BalasHapusThank you kristina, have a nice day
BalasHapusMy revised essay :
BalasHapusIf weekend comes, i have many activities to spent my weekend time. First, my favorite activities is singing. I am very happy if i am singing, almost every weekend i always singing in front of my friends. Also my family is very like to sing, singing can give some benefits to my self become enjoy, relax and to be able to increasing my spirit. The second activities is read many books. I usually read many books on the weekend, the types of books that i read are novel, science books, fiction books, technology books. Although the prices of these books is little bit expensive, i have willing to spend money to buy these books. If i read many books, i can increase my insight or knowledge on my brain. It's so excited to spent time with that activities on the weekend. The third activities is i am playing the online games, the online games is very interesting because i can reach it only in my smartphone or gadget. But if my gadget is crashed, i will go to the games box to plays the online games. There are several online games that i often to plays, which are survival games, arcade, and games strategy. It can motivate me to refresh and stimulate my brain to think fast and precise. The last, i can do that activities which are singing, read some books, playing games online because it's precious for me to refresh and change my negative side in my brain. Not only to entertaining my self but that activities above can influence my weekend moods and spirit. After i do that activities, my feelings will become happy and ready to face the hardest of life.