" The benefits and dangers of internet "
As the advance technology, the people around the world can be connected by internet. Nowadays, internet has become important things for our lives. We are able to found anything rapidly by using internet. Most of people use internet to obtain information and as the communication facilities. However, on condition that people use internet in wrong way, the addictive of internet may harm the user. I will explore the benefits and dangers of internet.
The benefits of internet for many people. The internet bring the people to communicate with people around the world in virtually through email, without having to leave their rooms. As the result of this, internet allows people within an group to easily communicate and share informations. Then, internet results in greater information. Any kinds of information available on the internet such as google, yahoo, bing. Every people are able to found the newest information easily available in the internet. Because of this, the people can increasing the knowledge by using the internet.
Beside of people get more benefit, but internet has dangers effect for people life. If we seen many of pornographic and violent images available in the internet. In our digital era,there are many free content on the Internet. While there are trusted resources, such as Wikipedia,
less trusted content also exists. Consequently, users can
accidentally come across violent or pornographic images that they may
not want to view. Next, internet will give you addictive effect. Many of people are often tend to spending many hours for using internet and they will feel convinience. As the result of this, the people will get bad condition which are myopia and your productivity will be decreased.
In conclusion,we can see that there are both benefits and dangers of internet for the people. The internet have many benefits to help people activities and as tools for communication around the worlds in virtually. Conversely, however, internet also give you some bad condition. In my opinion, the people will get more benefit and able to refused the bad impact provided that you are able to use internet wisely.
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