Citizens Should Pay Themselves with Private Health Insurance
According WHO, healthcare as a mental, physical and social welfare condition that functions normally not only from the absence of an illness. As we seen that indonesia is one of the biggest population in the world with many sickness that indonesia citizen have. Because of that problem in healthcare, I very disagree that Government should give fund free healthcare through taxes for the all citizen. Here all my reason why i disagree with that statement.
The first reason that I disagree is government have over budget for this free healthcare. As we seen that the government should to pay all of public facilities sector which are education, infrastructure, and healthcare. Currently, if you have seen the CNN Indonesia. In that news stated Finance Minister Sri Mulyani said the results of the audit of the Financial and Development Supervisory Agency (BPKP) showed a financial deficit in the Social Security Management Agency (BPJS) last year reaching Rp9.1 trillion. It means that the government has not efficient allocation of budget and make decrease in economic benefits from other public sectors.
The second reason that i disagree is the limited facilities of free healthcare services. Many of citizens wants to get the unlimited healthcare service. But if we have seen CNN Indonesia, the union of doctors said that around 1,739 hospitals have collaborated with BPJS, some of hospital just give the salary around Rp. 3,000 thousand per patient. How the doctors and hospital will increasing the facilities if the government still not capable to given appropriate salary for the doctors. Sometimes the doctors are not given wholeheartedly different with private health insurance.
The second reason that i disagree is the limited facilities of free healthcare services. Many of citizens wants to get the unlimited healthcare service. But if we have seen CNN Indonesia, the union of doctors said that around 1,739 hospitals have collaborated with BPJS, some of hospital just give the salary around Rp. 3,000 thousand per patient. How the doctors and hospital will increasing the facilities if the government still not capable to given appropriate salary for the doctors. Sometimes the doctors are not given wholeheartedly different with private health insurance.
The third reason that I disagree is unfairness of tax rates. As we know that indonesia have many tax revenue, but the tax rate for every economic class is different. For the example, if you have higher salary below than 500 million per year and those of you have salary more than 500 million. The tax rate will be bigger if your salary is progressive. It's not fair because some of citizen already pay higher of tax and the service is same with those of citizen have low salary.
Nevertheless, many people argue about that statement. People said that the government should provide fund free healthcare through the taxes because function of the taxes. However, if we seen that there are some problems in lack implementation of free healthcare in the field like the government has not efficient. Furthermore, our taxes allocation is not only for healthcare but taxes must be allocated for all sectors. In conclusion, it's depend on the choices and conditions of citizen because the healthy is more important than all of things.
Nevertheless, many people argue about that statement. People said that the government should provide fund free healthcare through the taxes because function of the taxes. However, if we seen that there are some problems in lack implementation of free healthcare in the field like the government has not efficient. Furthermore, our taxes allocation is not only for healthcare but taxes must be allocated for all sectors. In conclusion, it's depend on the choices and conditions of citizen because the healthy is more important than all of things.
Great essay. A little suggestion for a word disagree there's still many word to desribe it like clash, conflict or argue hehe
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BalasHapusHi, I think your essay is good. But, I suggest you to make it shorter and it would be better if you change the argument sentence because it's all the same "The first/second/third reason that I disagree is..."
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BalasHapusYour content has explained clearly but I suggest you to adding more concession in your argumen
Hi! Your essay is good however i found some grammatical error. Maybe you could recheck and fix it. Thank you!
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BalasHapuswhat a great essay. but i suggest you to change some of that phase to the shorter one to make your essay shorter.
BalasHapusIt's fun to read your essay. It has the right structure and you delivere it clearly and sufficient evidence
BalasHapushi wildan, your essay is good and clearly explained but I suggest you to shorten it because it's more than 350 words, thank you
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BalasHapusyour essay is already good. But i still find an error grammar on it, and your essay is more than 350 words. Maybe you can decrease the evidence that you gave on each contra statement.
BalasHapusHi Wildan, you state your argument clearly with the evidences, but I suggest you decrease the words because your essay contain more than 350 words.
BalasHapusIt's a good essay. Because you expressed clearly and used a good evidence. Goodjob kal!
BalasHapusAccording WHO, healthcare as a mental, physical and social welfare condition that functions normally not only from the absence of an illness. As we seen that indonesia is one of the biggest population in the world with many sickness that indonesia citizen have. Because of that problem in healthcare, I very disagree that Government should give fund free healthcare through taxes for the all citizen. Here all my reason why i disagree with that statement.
BalasHapusI argue that the government have over budget. Currently, if you have seen the CNN Indonesia. In that news stated Finance Minister Sri Mulyani said that financial deficit in the Social Security Management Agency (BPJS) last year reaching Rp9.1 trillion. It means that the government has not efficient allocation of budget and make decrease in economic benefits from other public sectors.
I think that the limited facilities of free healthcare services. Many of citizens wants to get the unlimited healthcare service. But if we have seen CNN Indonesia, the union of doctors said that around 1,739 hospitals have collaborated with BPJS, some of hospital just give the salary around Rp. 3,000 thousand per patient. I think that how to increase the facilities for BPJS users if the government give low salary for the doctors. The result are the doctors will give maximum services for private health insurance users.
The last, I think about unfairness of tax rates. As we know that indonesia have many tax revenue, but the tax rate for every economic class is different. As we can seen that citizens who have higher salary should to pay the higher tax based on the tax regulation. In the same way, they will got the same services although they have done to pay higher taxes. Many of them think that they have to use private insurance.
However, the other people still agree that the government should provide fund free healthcare through the taxes because function of the taxes. Nevertheless, in facts that you have seen above the goverment have not capable to allocate the budget properly. In conclusion, it’s depend on citizens choices and condition.
good job on your essay its interesting nice
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