The world's oceans are filling up with waste plastic
Plastic has been usual for many people in the world. We use plastic for everything and which harmful our environment especially oceans. Currently, many of ocean is being over contaminated by the waste plastic especially in Indonesia. We have seen that the trash dumped by mariners, the people and sea-goers in the sea because it does not readily break down in nature. Although serious problems have arisen as a result of this, there are solutions.
One of the first problems of waste plastic is the growth of death marine ecosystems. Currently, around 10 up to 20 million tons of waste plastic has been polluted by the fisherman activities in the ocean every year, resulting in coral reefs and some marine biota that live on coral reefs will decrease. Another major problem is easy for many mammals and other marine animals swallow garbage material. For the examples, as people know that plastic able stays in hundred of years and only 9% of the plastic every produced gets recycled, resulting in many mammals die of poisoning because they consider it their food.
It's important that action is taken to resist these problems. Governments should ensure that strong legislation and controls that will prevent the people from dumping waste trash to oceans, such as the government give the punishment through get surcharge or fine for those people dumping trash into the ocean. They are able to closely control the fisherman activities on the ocean by navy marine. Then, the government, company and related institutions must also change the plastic consuming in their business to reduce waste plastic in the ocean through implementing of 6R function and educate many people about dangers of waste plastic.
To conclude, plastic is one of the things that can't to be recycled and it's harmful for the marine and biodiversity ocean. However, with the right action by society, government and company, it can save our ocean life become free from waste plastic
To conclude, plastic is one of the things that can't to be recycled and it's harmful for the marine and biodiversity ocean. However, with the right action by society, government and company, it can save our ocean life become free from waste plastic
Hi wildan, i am so excited to read your essay btw. But i think that you have to add more content of ur essay. Thanks, good job
BalasHapusI think your essay is good. But, maybe for the second problem, the word "easy" should be changed into "the ease". And for the solutions, you may add other party that is also responsible for this, for example the business/companies. Thank you.
BalasHapusIt's a good essay. Because your structure is correct and your sentences are very clear. Good job!
BalasHapusHi wildan !! it's a good essay and structure correct. good job
BalasHapusYou have wrote an inspiring essay to reduce plastic wages. Amazing I really enjoy reading it
BalasHapusHi Wildan , your essay is good, you explain it clearly and easy to understand. Good job
BalasHapusI enjoyed reading your essay. The structure is correct and you explain it clearly. Well done!
BalasHapusHi Wil, your essay has structured well, problems and solutions are stated clearly make it easy to understand. Good job.
BalasHapusHi! It's better to put some words in your conclusion. But it is a good essay! Nice work!
BalasHapusSuch a great essay, easy to read and understand. The structure also correct. Good job wildan
BalasHapusHi! Your essay has structured according to the sequences, good job ^^
BalasHapusgreat essay! its is very clear and informative :)
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BalasHapusPlastic has been usual for many people in the world. We use plastic for everything and which harmful our environment especially oceans. Currently, many of ocean is being over contaminated by the waste plastic especially in Indonesia. We have seen that the trash dumped by mariners, the people and sea-goers in the sea because it does not readily break down in nature. Although serious problems have arisen as a result of this, there are solutions.
One of the first problems of waste plastic is the growth of death marine ecosystems. Currently, around 10 up to 20 million tons of waste plastic has been polluted by the fisherman activities in the ocean every year, resulting in coral reefs and some marine biota that live on coral reefs will decrease. Another major problem is easy for many mammals and other marine animals swallow garbage material. For the examples, as people know that plastic able stays in hundred of years and only 9% of the plastic every produced gets recycled, resulting in many mammals die of poisoning because they consider it their food.
It's important that action is taken to resist these problems. Governments should ensure that strong legislation and controls that will prevent the people from dumping waste trash to oceans, such as the government give the punishment through get surcharge or fine for those people dumping trash into the ocean. They are able to closely control the fisherman activities on the ocean by navy marine. Then, the government, company and related institutions must also change the plastic consuming in their business to reduce waste plastic in the ocean through implementing of 6R function and educate many people about dangers of waste plastic.
To conclude, plastic is one of the things that can't to be recycled and it's harmful for the marine and biodiversity life. However, with the right action by society, government and company, it can save our ocean life become free from waste plastic
what an informative essay! You explain it very well ☺️
BalasHapusHi, wildan! What an inspiring essay! U did it very well! Keep up the good work!
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